Sunday, June 12, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

I'm in the middle of nonstop revisions, so this post will be short and sweet. It's from Half-Blood.

This is Alex POV and quick line from Luke.
Page 124

The air sucked right out the room the moment he stepped into the building. He was tall—maybe even as tall as Aiden, but I couldn’t be sure. His blond hair was pulled back in a small ponytail, showing off his impossibly perfect features and golden complexion. He wore all black, like the Sentinels did. Under a different circumstance—one in which I didn’t actually realize what he was—I would’ve said he was smokin’ hot.

“Holy crap,” Luke murmured.


  1. Awesome sentence! I can't wait to read Half-Blood.*_* Thank you for posting! :D

  2. whew!! I want more! Great snippet.

  3. SEEETH! I miss Seth. I think I'll have to read HB again.